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Saturday, 10 October 2015

Blake's 100WC

One day some boys went out for a walk. They went into the bush and said, "Let's play a game of hide and go seek. Let's play half the group is in and the other half is hiding". So the hiding group went off into the bush. One of the boys who was hiding, was walking and fell into the hole of doom and was never seen. 120 years later when the forest was being dug out they found a sculpture with what look like a whole lot of legs being eaten. The Question is: Was it a sculpture?

3 comments:

  1. Love the story, would you do it again?

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  2. Hey Blake, I really liked the story, If you write it again, would you add more words or less?

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  3. Hey Blake, I really liked the story, If you write it again, would you add more words or less?

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