We are a class of creative Year 6 & 8 students at Yaldhurst Model School who continually aim to be 'Heroes' in everything that we do. This year we hope to develop our skills and confidence, collaborate with others, reach our goals and extend our learning in a 'Learn, Create, Share,' environment. Come along on our 2021 journey!
Kia Ora Rimu Class, My name is Katelynn and I am a year 8 student at Grey Main School in Totara 1!
Good job for getting blogger of the week Kade! I really like this blog post as it tells us who and what it is. Maybe next time you could tell us why he got blogger of the week, add more colour and maybe a picture of one of his blog posts. But apart from that it was quite a good blog post.
Bon Jour Rimu class my name is Angelina I am a year 7 student at Grey Main school in Totara 1.
First of all I think it is brilliant that you do the blogger of the week. I like how you have the name Kade is bright and colourful letters so it stands out.
The only thing you could improve of is maybe saying how much blog post she did, apart from that amazing post.
Hi Rimu class! I like how you do brilliant blogger every week it reminds me when our class did star of the week! But next time you could say why Kade is the blogger of the week and also you could make the picture more intresting instead of putting just the name!
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Kia Ora Rimu Class, My name is Katelynn and I am a year 8 student at Grey Main School in Totara 1!
ReplyDeleteGood job for getting blogger of the week Kade! I really like this blog post as it tells us who and what it is. Maybe next time you could tell us why he got blogger of the week, add more colour and maybe a picture of one of his blog posts. But apart from that it was quite a good blog post.
Keep up the great work Rimu Class!
Katelynn
Totara 1
Bon Jour Rimu class my name is Angelina I am a year 7 student at Grey Main school in Totara 1.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I think it is brilliant that you do the blogger of the week. I like how you have the name Kade is bright and colourful letters so it stands out.
The only thing you could improve of is maybe saying how much blog post she did, apart from that amazing post.
- Angelina, Totara 1
Hi Rimu class! I like how you do brilliant blogger every week it reminds me when our class did star of the week! But next time you could say why Kade is the blogger of the week and also you could make the picture more intresting instead of putting just the name!
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