Sunday 27 September 2015

Emily's 100 WC - "The Mystery Statue"

A long long time ago there was a little village called green easter bunny village, strange ah? One day there was a mystery Blue hole in the sky and everyone was wondering why. Later that night everyone went to bed but there was one boy who stayed up, and his name was Ben, he is a boy that doesn't have a mum. So that night he was looking at the moon, because when his mum died it was a full moon day.Suddenly BOOM!! POW!!SLAM!!A really scary statue fell from the big blue hole... To be continued...

1 comment:

  1. HI, Emily I love your writing it is easy to read, because it is like you are talking to me ( strange ah?)
    I hope you keep getting more and more comments on your 100wc:)
    Chloe

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