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Wednesday, 23 September 2015

Come and have a read: Jack's 100WC (Word Challenge) "The Human Blender"

One nice sunny day my friends and I were out on a walk when we came across a machine that looked like a blender, a giant blender! So we stopped to have a look to see what it was . My friend Franklin climbed up on to it and looked inside and after that the rest of us did. "It's a funny looking thing isn't?" Said Nathan. I said"I agree." For some reason it smelt like flesh as Franklin noticed . So we looked inside again and then some hands reached out and grabbed us and pulled us in.

3 comments:

  1. Wow Jack what a great wee read! Makes me what to know more! How big was big? Could it fit a person? What happened after you all got pulled in? Hope you write a sequel :)

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  2. What a fantastic story Jack. Where were you walking ? Was it in a forest ? I too hope there is a sequel.....! Love it.

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  3. What a fantastic story Jack. Where were you walking ? Was it in a forest ? I too hope there is a sequel.....! Love it.

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