One nice sunny day my friends and I were out on a walk when we came across a machine that looked like a blender, a giant blender! So we stopped to have a look to see what it was . My friend Franklin climbed up on to it and looked inside and after that the rest of us did. "It's a funny looking thing isn't?" Said Nathan. I said"I agree." For some reason it smelt like flesh as Franklin noticed . So we looked inside again and then some hands reached out and grabbed us and pulled us in.
We are a class of creative Year 6 & 8 students at Yaldhurst Model School who continually aim to be 'Heroes' in everything that we do. This year we hope to develop our skills and confidence, collaborate with others, reach our goals and extend our learning in a 'Learn, Create, Share,' environment. Come along on our 2021 journey!
Wednesday, 23 September 2015
Come and have a read: Jack's 100WC (Word Challenge) "The Human Blender"
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Descriptive Writing
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Wow Jack what a great wee read! Makes me what to know more! How big was big? Could it fit a person? What happened after you all got pulled in? Hope you write a sequel :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story Jack. Where were you walking ? Was it in a forest ? I too hope there is a sequel.....! Love it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story Jack. Where were you walking ? Was it in a forest ? I too hope there is a sequel.....! Love it.
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