Sammy just got a new toy from and he saw a weird pot of legs rise from the ground at the middle of the town, my visual was off. One of the legs kicked me in the leg and l fell over, I landed on the ground. When l looked at it, it just perished away; strange. I require a trip home now! We went in the car and a spurt of water got me from the waterfall. Now l know not to ever beg or ask for a toy again to my mum and dad.
Hi Jesse, you used some technical in the story that made it interesting.
ReplyDeleteYou also used great punctuation.
The story had a great morel, and next time make sure that you re read every thing so that it makes sense. eg: Sammy just got a new toy from( )and he saw a weird pot...
-Nikita